When asked a few years ago, as a novelist and teacher of writing, for a list of writing tips to accompany a publicity piece in a San Francisco newspaper, I produced the following list:
- Write every day.
- Observe and listen.
- Employ all the senses.
- Use strong verbs.
- Detail!
- A specific always beats an abstraction.
- Describe in motion.
- Anglo-Saxon words are usually more effective than romance based.
- Fiction is dramatization; dramatization is point of view, sense impressions, detail, action and dialogue.
- In dialogue, keep speeches short.
- Look for likenesses, parallels, contrasts, antitheses and reversals.
- Beware the use of the habitual case (would), the passive voice and the word there.
- Plotting is compulsion versus obstacles.
- In the second draft, start deleting adverbs.
- Borrow widely, steal wisely.
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笑来老师这么晚还没睡哦
Great tips! 顺便提一下，的作者谭恩美（Amy Tan）曾经师从Oakley Hall。
“喜福会“的作者。
哎～～～每天写
笑来，如果我今天真的写不出什么东西，我就随便找本杂志或小说抄一章，就算OK了。可以不？
In the second draft, start deleting adverbs.
Borrow widely, steal wisely.
很喜欢这两句,hoho
There are a great many careers in which the increasing emphasis is on specialization.
请问这句话该如何翻译？
尤其是in which 中的in修饰哪个词，还有on specialization 中的on 是什么意思呢？
in不是修饰谁，而是which做in的介词宾语；which指careers；on是与emphasis连用的（惯用法）。
如果which做关系代词的话，in做谁的介词，那on specialization就是倒装句了吗？
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笑来老师，如何克服重新学习英语那种急躁的心态？尤其又要考研又要从基础抓起，明年还要考托福，我感觉很难平衡，尤其是按你说的方法：挣扎着搞清每一句话，真是太难了，一篇文章就折磨了我两天（6个小时），许多看似懂的句子（意思大意明白，但转述起来却发现语言组织能力好差）一旦深入分析就发现语法不过关，词汇意思把握的不准确，而且翻译出来的感觉始终不太好，觉得差了点儿什么。最可怕的是觉得速度慢。半天也抠不出来一句，实在是一种折磨，我该怎么办呢？以目前这个进度，我觉得完成考研这个任务（65分）都很难，内心的恐惧着实让我不安，尤其还要每天上班，应对无聊的工作，时间完全不够用，有什么方法能够改善这个状况呢？期待你的指导
第8条没看懂。Anglo-Saxon words是什么？
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